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Bad Poetry Monday – 5 February 3, 2008

Filed under: Bad Poetry Mondays — minnesotamom @ 8:46 pm

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the orchid leaned over its shadow, mesmerized by the shape

of its long, lean limbs as they swayed in

the summer breeze.

As night approached, it grew taller and more disdainful

 

the orchid developed a fear of its shadow, which mocked and towered

over her. She turned from it

and hid her face in her quivering leaves

When the stillness of the evening overtook,

she gathered up her courage and dared to look…

 

But Shadow was gone, and she rested peacefully,

Only

to have it return

the next day

 

5 Responses to “Bad Poetry Monday – 5”

  1. Lori Says:

    Poor sweet orchid. I envisioned her weeping in her leaves. ;)

    lo

  2. Charlie Says:

    *Monday Morning Elevator*
    There was a beach bum from Nantucket,
    with an eyebrow so long he should pluck it.
    With his tweezer in hand, and his shoe full of sand…
    … not many words rhyme with “Nantucket.”

  3. I like this poem. It is sweet. I wish I had some clever rhyme to type but I don’t…now I feel like a loser.

  4. minnesotamom Says:

    Nice, Char. How about bucket. Or **** it. Just kidding…not allowed on my blog! ;)

    Tuck it.
    Suck it (like a baby on a thumb, people).
    Truck it.
    Uh, that’s all I got.

  5. Charlie Says:

    Yeah – I was going to use Suck it… but that too closely resembled the original limerick from Nantucket…


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